Hidden treasure box
Once i saw a big person sail away in far far sea with a big treasure box he was pouring his eyeballs out he was crying very hard like he was skieing the ship. so I went on a little boat he was scared because he was alone on the ship that ship is hiddening to shark Island oooooooohhhhhhhh nnnnoooo .said me the little girl wasn't alone her family was with her they brogth food with them but they. didn't broght water because they are in water part 2
The man lookedat the back of the boat he saw the family so he brogth them on bored he said you are wellcome do you guys have food all we have to go spear fishing why because we do the end
By Jacinda Yr 5
Hello Jacinda
ReplyDeleteI am Joseph
I like the story you wrote, its very interesting and its a pretty awesome story.
From your blogging buddy Joseph
Did you know that I am from room 11 and my teachers name is Jacinda!
Here is a link to our blog!
http://room11gms.blogspot.co.nz/
Kia Ora Jacinda
ReplyDeleteI love your writing about the hidden treasure box I also liked how you described the little girl and her family and remember full stops.
Lovely writing!!!
See ya
Bye