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Monday, 20 May 2013

WALT: Free writing

 

 

 

Hidden treasure box    

 

Once i saw   a big person sail away in far far sea with a big treasure box he was pouring his eyeballs out he was crying very hard like he was skieing the ship. so I went on a little boat he was  scared because he was alone  on the ship that ship is hiddening to shark Island oooooooohhhhhhhh nnnnoooo .said me the little girl wasn't alone her family was with her they brogth food with them but they. didn't broght water because they are in water          part 2                                                                                                           

The man lookedat the back of the boat he saw the family so he brogth them on bored he said you are wellcome do you guys have food all we have to go spear fishing why  because we do                           the end 

By Jacinda Yr 5

                                                                                                                                                                                                     

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