Room 11 Blog Busters

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Monday, 20 May 2013

WALT : Choose our own ideas to write about

 

The stream was going at grate pasts.Rocks tumberling 

down you could hear the splash when it

hit the water.

 

Sitting  on the beach waves  tumberling  on my legs

sand tickling my legs.Cubes of sand rolling

in and out of the sea. 

 

123 go! running as fast as I can my hart beating

as I hear my name getting called out

I over tack someone  'yes' I say in my head. 

my legs felling tingly my boady started to shiver.   

 

By Grace Yr 5

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