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Thursday 23 May 2013

Teacher interview

 

Once I had a theher inafuoa with Mr mqween and Ms smith and Mr mqween siad  how good I wasand I was prowd of my self .ther was some thins I had to work on.but that is ok lees I'v ben good and I like school becose you lernaen new thins.and now I'm going to tri hader in class then I will be a bit beter it my learning

 

By Cory

 

Monday 20 May 2013

WALT: Write about anything we like

 

 

 I am an Axoloto i miss my famaly im from mexaco and im stuck in a glass box with heaps of sceary

monsters im realy scerd and trying to brack free from this evil glass box.I don't like it hear i hope

some one will save me.All that taping on the glass it hearts my ears iv got a copel of plants and a rock.

 

                                                                                 THE end

 

By Jayden Yr 5

WALT : Choose our own ideas to write about

 

The stream was going at grate pasts.Rocks tumberling 

down you could hear the splash when it

hit the water.

 

Sitting  on the beach waves  tumberling  on my legs

sand tickling my legs.Cubes of sand rolling

in and out of the sea. 

 

123 go! running as fast as I can my hart beating

as I hear my name getting called out

I over tack someone  'yes' I say in my head. 

my legs felling tingly my boady started to shiver.   

 

By Grace Yr 5

WALT Recount my cousin's birthday

 

 

Yesterday which was Tuesday we had to go to town to do some shopping and go and bye a birthday present for my baby cousin's birthday,his name is Alaka. We went to get the present for my baby cousin and then we went to get the shopping,me my sisters and my brother had to stay in the car.It got really hot we couldn't open the windows cause mum had took the keys, when mum and dad got  

back, we drove off and went to the birthday when we got there we gave the present to my baby cousin and said "happy birthday Alaka  we hope you have a good birthday, and good day" my dad said "we are not staying for the night" so we stayed her for a 3 minutes and went home. 

 

By Summah

WALT: Free writing

 

 

On my weekend we went to the beah.we fond lots of crabs tasay fond the bigist crab.we fond 14 or 21. we had lots of fun we plad games.but sanddly the drama startid we vst the adols at ball rasewe had toget all the mums down.it was hard and sor.!!! 

WALT :Free writing

 

 

ones a pon a time in a peaceful village. A fearsome dragen dropt fom the ski .A wete snow  dragoin was pillaing the  people . People sremed the fearsome drabgin is her

 

By Kahale

WALT: Free writing

 

 

paparoa motocross relays

 

we are all lined up waiting for the man to let us go. OK paruabay 7 your time starts now

so off i go racing  down the track there's a sine up a head by a river crossing  slow down.

But i don't because every second counts so i race around the corner oh o i cant slow down 

crash!!! in to the fence

WALT: Free writing

 

 

 

Hidden treasure box    

 

Once i saw   a big person sail away in far far sea with a big treasure box he was pouring his eyeballs out he was crying very hard like he was skieing the ship. so I went on a little boat he was  scared because he was alone  on the ship that ship is hiddening to shark Island oooooooohhhhhhhh nnnnoooo .said me the little girl wasn't alone her family was with her they brogth food with them but they. didn't broght water because they are in water          part 2                                                                                                           

The man lookedat the back of the boat he saw the family so he brogth them on bored he said you are wellcome do you guys have food all we have to go spear fishing why  because we do                           the end 

By Jacinda Yr 5

                                                                                                                                                                                                     

WALT Write a recount



On mothers day me and my family and lots of other family went to 
the beach for the day. Me and my friends made a little rock pool
for all the sea things we find. For my first time I picked up a little
crab. Then Jethro found a big crab it was purple my dad picked
it up and I ran a away. And I stood on lots of oysters so now
I have big cuts on my feet. and at was my mothers day.
THE END
by Madison Yr 5



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This is a place where we can share our awesome writing and get some feedback from other kids around the world.

We are just starting this blog in Term 2 2013.