WALT :Talk about our thoughts and feelings about Cross country.
Today is cross country! . . . . . And I feel like a fox who thinks he's going to get his lunch. My brain is bursting with exitement!.....but I have to say that I have butterflies in my tummy. I'm feel like I'm going to be late, I'm feeling my thighs quiver! And I'm hoping I'm full of luck oooohhhhh aaaaahhhhh I can't wait!
I'm like a puppy in a cage that wants to be free and frolik, play and run like the wind!
With a loud YAP YAP YAP YAP! I'm wondering how am I going to run, if I have butterflies, and what if i get carried away, and go off the track.....who hoooo hooooo!...mmmmmm I'm whining and yapping and what i really meant is i want to get out there now.... and RUN!!!!!
by Elliott Kippenberger
Kia Ora Elliott and the rest of room 11.
ReplyDeleteThis is a great description of your cross country day we have just had ours and it was great! I like how you have used great describing words like bursting,frolic and quiver,you are a awesome writer!
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From Ella R-W
Kiaora Elliott
ReplyDeleteWe liked your cross country story. It sounded interesting and we hope you won.
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Aloha Elliott
ReplyDeleteMy name is Samantha and my school had there cross country I HATE IT!!! but I still went and joyed in anyway.
From your blogging buddy:Samantha
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