Good piece of writing we really enjoyed it. It would be great if you could credit your images. We wondered if you could go back and put some fullstops in because it is hard to understand. Marcel and Jacob!
Hi I am Neil and I am Ryan. We think your story is interesting.We would liked more description -you could describe what is happening a bit more so we can picture it.
Good piece of writing we really enjoyed it.
ReplyDeleteIt would be great if you could credit your images.
We wondered if you could go back and put some fullstops in because it is hard to understand.
Marcel and Jacob!
Hi I am Neil and I am Ryan.
ReplyDeleteWe think your story is interesting.We would liked more description -you could describe what is happening a bit more so we can picture it.
Dear Jaden
ReplyDeleteDo you like zombies and
I really liked your story.
By Chloe
At glenview school :)