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Procedure writing- How to be a bus monitor

How to be a bus monitor What you need Bus book (to see if you are on the bus) Warnings page Pen Bus (get person to drive the bus) You need knowledge 1. First you need to go to the bus lines. 2. You make sure you have everybody is lined up nicely. 3 . You get the book and call out names to see if everyone is here. 4. If they are missing you or the bus monitor goes to find them. 5 .` After the teacher has marked you you may get on the bus. 6 . the bus monitor leads you onto the bus. 7. When you are on the bus you wait for the other lines to get on. 8 . When they are all on you have to find a set. 9 . When the bus starts you have to stay in your set and not move. 10 . When the bus has stopped you can move sets. 11 . If the bus is moving and you move you will get a warning. 12 . The bus will give you a warning in the bad book. 13. Once you have three warnings you will be off the bus for weeks. 14. But if you keep moving you will have to sit in the front. 15 . The front has a set belt so you can not move sets. 16 . When it comes to your bus stop you grab your bag and hop off. 17 . If your bag is to heave the bus monitor will help you by Grace

Report on Rabbits and Hares

Volcanos

Gmail

The raging Storm

by William

Dazzling Princesses

by Grace

WANTED!!!

By Jayden

The Storm

by Jayden

This is one of the tools you can use on Google docs by Summah

Here is a really good touch typing APP we are using

Try it yourself!

 

https://chrome.google.com/webstore/search/touch%20typing%20for%20kids

 

It helps us get faster at typing!

WALT write about anything we like

 

paparoa motocross relays

 

we are all lined up waiting for the man to let us go. OK paruabay 7 your time starts now

so off i go racing  down the track there's a sine up a head by a river crossing  slow down.

But i don't because every second counts so i race around the corner oh o i cant slow down 

crash!!! in to the fence

 

By Cole

WALT Write about The netball game

 

On Saturday I  had to go to my  netball game witch is in kingsenton park, when we got there it was 9.00 clock we play at 10.00 clock.    Me and my mum waited under the shelter then for a while I found my couch, her name is Kate, when all  of my team got here we hoped in a line and walked to where we are going to play it is court 8, my couch Kate said "we are playing Kamo 2 now get out there and play" we got our bibs on as quick as we can then went to play whoooooo the whistle went we started to play

I was goal attack i ran to the semi  circle and one of my team mate threw the ball to me and I turned around to shoot a goal I waited until 3 seconds and shot the ball into the hoop and scored a goal. When netball was finished Kate said "the player of the day is Summah " "yeah its finally me im the winner i get a trophie and a certificate that says you get a free mc  Donald's when I got home dad was proud of me   

 

By Summah

WALT write about time with our friends

 

...I  woke up on my bed just waiting for something bad to happen like every other day but then i just remembered  that it was my birthday today  .So knowing it was my birthing  and nothing  bad would happen i walked down the hall way spy like  .And when I got to the kitchen  wow mum backing muffins and everything  wow thanks mum well it is your birthday we all gathered around  the tabel  

and in no matter of time it had all been eaten it was the best birthday every.

 

By Grace

WALT Write about The storm

 

On one terrifying night there was a storm. The family ware in the family ware one girl and a mum and dad they ware all in bed when a tornado started then the family woke up. And they ran into the humanest badminton and lightening was striking and the haws was destroyed in pesos after 2 minutes they ware terrifying like there was a lien was going to eat them. 

 

By Elijah

The Jungle Storm by Jacinda 

FW: news letter

 

 

 

WALT :Talk about our thoughts and feelings about Cross country.

Today is cross country! . . . . . And I feel like a fox who thinks he's going to get his lunch. My brain is bursting with exitement!.....but I have to say that I have butterflies in my tummy. I'm feel like I'm going to be late, I'm feeling my thighs quiver! And I'm hoping I'm full of luck oooohhhhh aaaaahhhhh I can't wait! 

I'm like a puppy in a cage that wants to be free and frolik, play and run like the wind!

With a loud YAP YAP YAP YAP! I'm wondering how am I going to run, if I have butterflies, and what if i get carried away, and go off the track.....who hoooo hooooo!...mmmmmm I'm whining and yapping and what i really meant is i want to get out there now.... and RUN!!!!!

 

by Elliott Kippenberger

WALT: Write a narrative about a storm

 

It was a darck and stormy night and Me and Cory and Matt were tuck in our bed nice and worm saddently BOOM'BANG'CRASH littnig and thunder as loud as 50 drums banging as loud as they can.

 

 

We looked out side a huge flude out side washed all our plants.A couple of minuts later a tonado smashing evry thing in its way we disided to cwikly pack our stuf and hide in a cave in till it was gone

By Jayden

WALT: Write a narrative about 'The Storm'

 

Teacher interview

 

Once I had a theher inafuoa with Mr mqween and Ms smith and Mr mqween siad  how good I wasand I was prowd of my self .ther was some thins I had to work on.but that is ok lees I'v ben good and I like school becose you lernaen new thins.and now I'm going to tri hader in class then I will be a bit beter it my learning

 

By Cory

 

WALT: Write about anything we like

 

 

 I am an Axoloto i miss my famaly im from mexaco and im stuck in a glass box with heaps of sceary

monsters im realy scerd and trying to brack free from this evil glass box.I don't like it hear i hope

some one will save me.All that taping on the glass it hearts my ears iv got a copel of plants and a rock.

 

                                                                                 THE end

 

By Jayden Yr 5

WALT : Choose our own ideas to write about

 

The stream was going at grate pasts.Rocks tumberling 

down you could hear the splash when it

hit the water.

 

Sitting  on the beach waves  tumberling  on my legs

sand tickling my legs.Cubes of sand rolling

in and out of the sea. 

 

123 go! running as fast as I can my hart beating

as I hear my name getting called out

I over tack someone  'yes' I say in my head. 

my legs felling tingly my boady started to shiver.   

 

By Grace Yr 5

WALT Recount my cousin's birthday

 

 

Yesterday which was Tuesday we had to go to town to do some shopping and go and bye a birthday present for my baby cousin's birthday,his name is Alaka. We went to get the present for my baby cousin and then we went to get the shopping,me my sisters and my brother had to stay in the car.It got really hot we couldn't open the windows cause mum had took the keys, when mum and dad got  

back, we drove off and went to the birthday when we got there we gave the present to my baby cousin and said "happy birthday Alaka  we hope you have a good birthday, and good day" my dad said "we are not staying for the night" so we stayed her for a 3 minutes and went home. 

 

By Summah

WALT: Free writing

 

 

On my weekend we went to the beah.we fond lots of crabs tasay fond the bigist crab.we fond 14 or 21. we had lots of fun we plad games.but sanddly the drama startid we vst the adols at ball rasewe had toget all the mums down.it was hard and sor.!!! 

WALT :Free writing

 

 

ones a pon a time in a peaceful village. A fearsome dragen dropt fom the ski .A wete snow  dragoin was pillaing the  people . People sremed the fearsome drabgin is her

 

By Kahale

WALT: Free writing

 

 

paparoa motocross relays

 

we are all lined up waiting for the man to let us go. OK paruabay 7 your time starts now

so off i go racing  down the track there's a sine up a head by a river crossing  slow down.

But i don't because every second counts so i race around the corner oh o i cant slow down 

crash!!! in to the fence

WALT: Free writing

 

 

 

Hidden treasure box    

 

Once i saw   a big person sail away in far far sea with a big treasure box he was pouring his eyeballs out he was crying very hard like he was skieing the ship. so I went on a little boat he was  scared because he was alone  on the ship that ship is hiddening to shark Island oooooooohhhhhhhh nnnnoooo .said me the little girl wasn't alone her family was with her they brogth food with them but they. didn't broght water because they are in water          part 2                                                                                                           

The man lookedat the back of the boat he saw the family so he brogth them on bored he said you are wellcome do you guys have food all we have to go spear fishing why  because we do                           the end 

By Jacinda Yr 5

                                                                                                                                                                                                     

WALT Write a recount

On mothers day me and my family and lots of other family went to 

the beach for the day. Me and my friends made a little rock pool

for all the sea things we find. For my first time I picked up a little

crab. Then Jethro found a big crab it was purple my dad picked

it up and I ran a away. And I stood on lots of oysters so now

I have big cuts on my feet. and at was my mothers day.

THE END
by Madison Yr 5

Room 11 Writing Blog Busters

Kia Ora
Welcome to Room 11's blog site for sharing writing.

This is a place where we can share our awesome writing and get some feedback from other kids around the world.

We are just starting this blog in Term 2 2013.